you, the carrier
have you ever thought?
when you fly a bottle
on our soft innocent face
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A meaningful and nice write. Firstly, people who do these..are they really human beings? Do we actually know the meaning of Human being nowadays? Time to think..
It's a nice poem and sad. It has a pretty message. I don't believe that there are people who throw acid on other people's faces. It's a crime. I denounce this criminal act.People should report this to the authorities immediately.I side with you. Thanks.
Oh women and girls of India, don your lead masks to avert this evil. Take faith in knowing that our eyes are now open and we can see, our ears are now attuned, and we hear India's cries and feel her pain. Our hearts are hard and cold to this injustice and the wicked shall recieve their Karma back tenfold! Survi... this is a important piece.; -)
Again this is a powerful poem. The government needs to listen to your words.
Again a daring poem from ur side, yeah wickedness should be banned
Yeah, we need to make a global law for this so it can make people beware of their bad action. Nice reminder and standing for the justice fight..always be strong_Soul
Wonderful appeal should open the eyes of wicked people. I congratulate you for your revealing the agony.
Your appeal is very powerful. Human beings should respond. Keep writing.
It’s a very relevant write; it’s an increasingly prevalent criminal activity with far reaching social economical and medical issues You have done well to highlight the heartless activity, it needs to condemned in the strongest terms and voices must unite against this evil activity, the killers of beauty and faces of life are simply murderers and nothing less. They have no claim to mercy or rhetorical human rights activism. Well written, heartfelt and emotionally strong. it is doubly engaging as the poet identifies personally with the victims and sends out a heart wrenching appeal careering across borders. well done liked
never beg to suckers. and humans are those who have humanity others are annihilators. they are a sabotage to the earth and their mothers and sisters.
This folded hands reminds me of a Muslim begging for his life with folded hands which was published in the press.In Kashmir Muslim fundamentalist extremists threw acid bottles against Muslim lady-teachersrecently.Ignorance and obsession make men violent.They feel it as something proud of or a game to delight (It is a sadistic pleasure for husbands /misguided guys.) Pain of girls is their gain as part of ragging even.This criminal exposure shall be mercilessly punished-You can write poems or essays on such issues to liberate womenYatra naryasthu poojyante/ ramanthe thathra devata, so Manusmruti tells.[Where ladies are honoured there only the godless (of prosperity) shower blessing]. No matter in a family or in a state/institution. Hope you will write more to educate the society in local papers /magazines also..This is a good attempt in simple words.
U r certainly a mesmerizing poetess...keep writing for the good cause.
U r certainly a mesmerizing poetess...keep writing for the good cause.
yeah, a great message is delivered nice one