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Thanks for sharing this. The imagery that comes forth from this shows so much bitterness that is consumes the words in an angry rage with regret, disdain and brokenness flowing through the lines. Depression seems to be standing tall through this that keeps one bound in an emotional prison of hate and hurt. One error in the first line, you have 'My face can't fake smile no more', instead of 'My face can't fake smiles no more' Apart from that though, this is well expressed of heartache and heartbreak. Many blessings to you