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Bittersweet.. As good-bye so often is. Your pain is apparent. But your mood is resolute. 'no more'. I agree. You deserve better. I like your rhymes. Warm regards, Sandra

I love the rhyming you wrote this well.. great write KRISTA

incredibly heart wrentching makes me want to never enter a mall again, but i keep making that promise to myself

This is really great, I can really connect and feel for you, most of my poems are usually about love, thanks for sharing this...

now that i have no heart no soul and that there is no lower place to fall Great lines indeed

Expressive and well phrase that can touch ones emotion.Good job!

Brokenhearted..good thing you have an outlet..let that emotions flow through... But great poem..you are really a great poet!

I think it good that you could write this and help get the hurt out of your heart. Thank you for sharing. Karin Anderson

i'm not quite sure i know what to say to this one...or even how i feel about it...i mean obviously you had a broken heart and you were at the bottom and you couldn't go anywhere but i was a little confused with the whole mall thing..you could you possibly explain this to me? ? ?

as time went on you mend your broken heart together the way it was before ya'll met......and now your over it...... An incredible piece...yet simple but good

I liked how simply put your pain was and broken heart. I loved it! How all was stolen and you had no where else to fall, very nice I think!

You're moving on! Good. I like the ways you made it simple but meaningful.

wow hey i wont leave u alone if i see u at the mall +++10 regards anjali

cute.. and sad.. I feel the pain in this poem.. Great piece of work Krista