Monday, May 8, 2006

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I thought I needed you
You were with a different girl every night
I thought we would be together forever
Wasn't that a lie
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Adeaze Tinkerbelle
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Hannah K. 29 May 2006

This is what I like reading and imaging in poems, the powerfulness of feeling when some boy you felt close to goes off to somebody he'll make feel the same way. I like this poem because it says exactly that. I have a poems similar to this in my collection. Keep it up,10 from F.F.! ! Best Wishes, Free Faller (Hannah)

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Isaac Mims 16 May 2006

i love your peoms. ^.^

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