Saturday, April 1, 2006
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When I walk away
I see a tear running down your face
I walk a little faster
Because your love comes on like shame
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01 April 2006
This poem has a lot of intense emotion in it. As someone 13 you should just keep writing.
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7/26/2025 12:58:42 AM # 1.0.0
Very powerful and heartfelt. Excellent Poem. I just have to tell you one small correction were at the in of your first verse where you have written because you love comes on like shame. It should your instead of you.