When I walk away
I see a tear running down your face
I walk a little faster
Because your love comes on like shame
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This poem has a lot of intense emotion in it. As someone 13 you should just keep writing.
Very powerful and heartfelt. Excellent Poem. I just have to tell you one small correction were at the in of your first verse where you have written because you love comes on like shame. It should your instead of you.