Thursday, November 10, 2005

No Money Comments

Rating: 3.5

no money to do anything with
its hard enough to get by
with out some riche kid walking by
they flant their three credit cards in your face
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Ashley Jensen
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Thandi 11 November 2021

Lol ok

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Anil Kumar Panda 22 October 2015

This is sad reality of the life.Very nice.Liked it.

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Anil Kumar Panda 22 October 2015

This is sad reality of the life.Very nice.

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Brian Mayo 21 October 2015

Your poem has tremendous flow and the raw energy of the downtrodden. Love it!

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 October 2015

We are need help! However, things are rough at times. Nice work.

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Analisssa Range 13 May 2006

I really like it and if any rich kids try to give you any lip you should give it right back at them lets see how they like it.

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