Thursday, October 1, 2020

No Meeting In Inconsistency Comments

Rating: 4.8

I thought
by the rhetorical words of poems
I will ornate you,
But you wanted the rainbow colored moon
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Suresh Kumar Ek 01 October 2020

The poem artistically brings out The disappointment as a poet The way people want to be read With beautiful images of Love and seperation

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Rajnish Manga 01 October 2020

you wanted the rainbow colored moon you wanted a floating palace with pink clouds But now vocal cords of my voice are torn I waited for long... But now I'm under the tomb.... //.... An evocative poem of love and longing which remains unrequited and ends in a tragedy. This is the story of a mismatch between desires and its fulfillment. Thanks a lot.

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Varsha M 01 October 2020

This is just smooth flowing poetic expression very well encaptivating the readers with his poetic devises from them of ignorance you took volta to death... very well penned. Thank-you for sharing.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 October 2020

Such a beautiful poem but I am afraid someone may say- it is plagiarized! Loved reading this beautiful poem of yours. Top 🌟

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