No Meeting In Inconsistency Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

No Meeting In Inconsistency

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I thought
by the rhetorical words of poems
I will ornate you,
But you wanted the rainbow colored moon

I thought
by the passionate pages of full poem
I will make hearty hut for you,
But you wanted a floating palace with pink clouds

I thought
I will make divine dresses for you
by the intoxicated lines of rhythmic poems,
But you wanted to wear the mermaid dress

Within your life's insinuation
I didn't find any harmony

I wrote poems for you
But now insects are building nests
in the old books of poems

My eyes sought you on your coming path
But now both sights becomes blind

I sang loudly for your rapturous meeting with me
But now vocal cords of my voice are torn

I waited for long time for your slight visiting
But now I'm under the unaided tomb

Oh, to me you didn't come
So, I didn't make any chum


01.10.2020 Chattogram

Thursday, October 1, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: conflict,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Suresh Kumar Ek 01 October 2020

The poem artistically brings out The disappointment as a poet The way people want to be read With beautiful images of Love and seperation

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Rajnish Manga 01 October 2020

you wanted the rainbow colored moon you wanted a floating palace with pink clouds But now vocal cords of my voice are torn I waited for long... But now I'm under the tomb.... //.... An evocative poem of love and longing which remains unrequited and ends in a tragedy. This is the story of a mismatch between desires and its fulfillment. Thanks a lot.

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Varsha M 01 October 2020

This is just smooth flowing poetic expression very well encaptivating the readers with his poetic devises from them of ignorance you took volta to death... very well penned. Thank-you for sharing.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 October 2020

Such a beautiful poem but I am afraid someone may say- it is plagiarized! Loved reading this beautiful poem of yours. Top 🌟

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