Sunday, February 1, 2009

..No Matter What Fate May Bring..... Comments

Rating: 4.7

Let me be the one who will be there for you
Let me be the one who you see the world through her eyes
Let me wake you every morning and telling you
I am glad that you are in my life
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a challenger poem! ! ! I liked it... 10

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Sarwar Chowdhury 20 June 2009

'So let us be the one for each other' 1 + 1 = 1 10++++++++

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Muhammad Ali 14 February 2009

lovely poem great impression dear, keep it up

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Bradley Little 12 February 2009

i loved this poem it was realy touching good job and great poem God or Allah bless you

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Yasser Koor 10 February 2009

what a lovely poem! ! ! ! ! i glad that u have some one deserve to tell him that. ur words need some one deserve it and believe it.

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Tyease Collins 07 February 2009

This poem is so sad but so strong. It shows how strong and how bonded you are with the other person Truly a remarkable poem -Tyease

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Angela Ade 06 February 2009

Strong words discribing love and what extend of sacrife one can make for love. a tight one! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Kite Remedy 01 February 2009

let me love you is the song me sing, let me be with no matter what fate may bring.. what a sincere verse you've written, great piece..

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Tork Souad Diana 01 February 2009

Lovely poem ^-^ It is not in the stars to hold our destiny but in ourselves.(W.Shakespeare)

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Serenity Prayer 01 February 2009

wonderful job! ! beautifully written. lovely poem.

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paasionate and comes from a pure heart. lovely

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Ency Bearis 01 February 2009

wonderful and well presented composition..passionately a nice interplay...10

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 01 February 2009

Let fates entwine both yours and mine, let he who put two souls on earth for the other to find, his ways are so divine.. Andy 10

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<font color=black>Nagourta 01 February 2009

'All will find a relapse on the path to your inner self, and all may find a way through strength' -Nagourta

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Catrina Heart 01 February 2009

so sweet and romantic....let us be the one for ech other no matter what fate may bring....awesome lines....10/10

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