Saturday, August 22, 2009

No Matter What (C) 8-22-09 Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was upset pettily mad about nothing
Choosing to believe that I was right in everyway
Lost in my own thoughts and suspicions
Over and over I think of you where could she be
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Zahir Kijani
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Louis Rams 04 September 2009

never doubt the love within, for that would be a crying sin. doubt should only come, when it is from them to you for to your heart you must be true. a strong conviction of love thou. i'll still give this one a ten, because you show that doubt can come even to the strongest heart.

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Myrtle Thomas 24 August 2009

Corey, I found this such a great expression of the emotions of love heartfelt feelings from a man's side spoken.Wonderfully expressed

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 23 August 2009

A good love poem expression the within very well.

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Zahir Kijani

Zahir Kijani

Buffalo, New york
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