Friday, December 7, 2012

No Mans Land.... Comments

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The mist descends pon no mans land
Where trees stripped of pride
Are forced to stand
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karen sinclair
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Danny Draper 18 December 2012

It is some how a metaphor for life and its ephemeral nature, this place this existence where we each scramble for a hold on and battle for love and life, but ultimately the life the land upon which we stake the greatest claim is lost from each and all it is at best a too early and feeble fleeting possession. Life is the no mans land, we love and hate, have war and truces, but ultimately it is lost to us, it is no mans land, just a passing territory of dubious tenure. A great write my friend. An extraordinary episode from our brutal indifference.

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Guy Lip-more 17 December 2012

Great write, liked this very much.

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Poetheart Morgan 07 December 2012

So No man lands is a interesting place. Stop a war is always a good option do do! ! ! Even for one day! ! ! !

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