No Love Poem Comments
Words refuse to configure themselves
Structures lack a solid foundation
That's how designs have shaped
No cognitive plot lies at the base
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Beautiful poem! Every sterling stanza strikes a chord on one's heart. Very thought provoking with superb imagery. To my favorites.
Drawn by Terence Cradock's poem dedicated to your poem, I came to read yours.It is absolutely beautiful poem! Let me quote, 'Words refuse to configure themselves Structures lack a solid foundation That's how designs have shaped No cognitive plot lies at the base Can I write a Love Poem for you? '
A poem can be written of wishes; wishes are like the trellis that the vine of words climb on. somehow your words have climbed an abstract trellis. May they continue.
GOD[GOD[ GOOD[DEVINE! so abstract you can feel it, in soul and mind. To my favorite, GEMS!
p3all horizons broods in void abstinence, trees leafless stand in naked indifference to winter wind gusts, wind gusts stir spread desolation silences, in a landscape love discards refuses to habitat
p2no poem pattern romantic passionate can rhyme, sing love throughout enduring time for two souls, lacking spark igniting fuels can never flame stone hearts cannot love burn, the moon shines no mystery illuminous love light, the sky a starless veil spans
p1love refuses to take form, refuses to configure into appealing shapes, refuses to take composing elements, transcending shape shifting into heart yearning love, no design foundation coherent can weave, poles apart thoughts minds hearts lives into lovers,
I wrote the poems 'A Place Where Love Will Not Dwell', 'Cold Stone Hearts Cannot Love Burn', 'Moon Sentences Stone Cold Silences', 'A Landscape Love Discards' and 'Love Refuses', inspired by the poem 'No Love Poem', by the poet Nosheen Irfan and dedicated to the poet Nosheen Irfan.
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7/29/2025 11:21:12 AM # 1.0.0
A beautiful poem. The lines of poem flow naturally to give beautiful poems, 'but when the moon is deep in thoughts The sky is a wide mass of absences' the lines becomes difficult to rhyme. s