Wednesday, November 19, 2014

No Love Lost Comments

Rating: 4.5

My mind kept wondering
And all i could find were empty spaces
and i journeyed into my present
isn't this what i feared the most?
...
Read full text

Anabahati Mlay
COMMENTS
Chinedu Dike 11 April 2015

Lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned from the heart. Love is a spiritual experience that affects us profoundly, it's whimsical and temperamental, coming unannounced and may leave without warning. Taking your emotion of love in stride when your love is not reciprocated is surely a good way to forge ahead. A nice poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Mlay. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

1 0 Reply
Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 22 November 2014

So i arise from my sorrows Wash my face, just to be sure Get out of the room Feel the wind on my cheeks A good poem on being optimistic and to be out of clutches of the past in search of a better future, Well done Col muhammad Khalid Khan

0 0 Reply
Aftab Alam Khursheed 19 November 2014

I start living again No love lost love is like brook or shallow river or hilly river - dry and heavy..thank you

0 0 Reply
Anabahati Mlay

Anabahati Mlay

Tanzania
Close
Error Success