Saturday, March 24, 2018

No Longer Mine Comments

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No longer mine, no longer mine
This broken heart I could not keep
The heart I had I left behind
No tears for love now when I sleep
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Chris Embrick
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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 March 2018

Broken heart cannot be kept alone. Life needs lover and beauty with dignity of hope. Love definitely takes time to find sweetness of honey. Soft and sweet breath whispers more about love perceived. A brilliant poem is excellently penned...10

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Chris Embrick 03 April 2018

Such love does seem to be harder to find these days but not impossible. Thank you Kumarmani

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Nudershada Cabanes 24 March 2018

Such a sweet, beautiful and tender poem of love shared by two. Wonderfully penned with a splendid rhyme. Few are lucky to find such kind of love.10

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Chris Embrick 03 April 2018

Thank you Nudershada. Your poem of love are beautiful to read. Thanks

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