Saturday, July 4, 2009

No Longer Have A Father Comments

Rating: 0.0

I no longer have a father,
I know he’s not coming back,
Sometimes I wish it didn’t matter,
When I know he’ll never walk through that door again,
...
Read full text

Fathimath Farha
COMMENTS
Cynthia Buhain-baello 06 July 2009

This is very near my heart as my Dad just passed away last May 5, and 'my dear Daddy is truly never coming back'. I like the way you used the repetitions throughout the poem, it is a unique, engaging style, and you maintained the key topic in the verses. Very creative and intense.10++++

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success