Sunday, October 29, 2006

No Longer Embracing Restraint Comments

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I used to be a practical man, temperate.
Embracing restraint, I looked straight ahead.
No one could turn me. I was content.
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William Jackson
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Bobbie Jean Wright 25 November 2007

whew! This is a good one! The velvateen rabbit is one of my favorites and you have embraced the pain in that story and turned it into the most passionate love poem I have read in a long time. This is a most exceptional piece and I am so thrilled to have found it. Thanks for sharing it. : o) Bj

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Geoff Warden 29 October 2006

Sir William...break out of it.....good tempernce need not restrint...just the voice of indifference............great write......

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Patricia Gale 29 October 2006

A deep piece, fantastic!

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