Wednesday, December 2, 2009

No Longer Can I Stay Comments

Rating: 4.8

My tongue is heavy
With words I have left unspoken
I want to tell you
But my heart thinks I would be mistaken
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Emma Kessler
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Amy Marie 06 November 2011

Wow! I love the way this poem flows.

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Anthony Quiles 07 March 2010

sweet... you do have a way with words...

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 20 December 2009

'My tongue is heavy With words I have left unspoken...' Very nicely written, Emma. This opening... Says how enriched one life is. I like this poem a lot.

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Christina Phan 18 December 2009

very sad, touching n wonderful job 10++ every line was gd

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Lindbergh Hughes 16 December 2009

A wonderful poem Emma! ! It's a little bit sad as Sara said above, however you remain your thoughts very deep.I love the last line when you say: 'But the distant place I am going Is where I feel I belong..'Great work! !

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Anju Addanki 11 December 2009

Welcome to poem hunter. A very good start very well written.

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Emma Adamyan 07 December 2009

wonderful poem. perfect work dear hewing :)

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Danny H 02 December 2009

Sad, but the truth of the matter was spoken with dignity Good job :)

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