Sunday, May 10, 2009

No Longer A Gleam Comments

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life sucks but you don't care
I know that life is never fair
because you were never there
you looked at me and walked away without a stare
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Jackie Oakden
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Marieta Maglas 09 July 2009

''was I part of your dreams where your head is full of steam where your nasty thoughts can teem where your presence is no longer a gleam '' a meaningful monologue penned in wonderful lines...

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wow. if this about who i think it is. im sorry and i didnt know you felt that strongly about him Great poem! ! 10+++

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Jackie Oakden

Jackie Oakden

Palm Springs, California
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