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Your eyes as the loss of ill timed fate.
Your voice as the soft sensual heartbreak.
Your tears as the time of have never been.
Your smile as the thought I think to see again.
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Your smile as the thought I think to see again. Your hands as untouched as your soul appears to be. I think your beautiful and amazing... i smiled as i read your poem. example is beautiful . love and its sentiments and desire. tony
The last part was very clever. As someone else said, the bait and switch technique was very well done.
This is my favorite of yours...say what you will but I just love the bait and switch technique you used here. I hope you are still writing.
This is wonderful.......I do so love this, and.....please....pass me another ice tea.....hehe...
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9/6/2025 8:17:16 PM # 1.0.0
Your eyes as the loss of ill timed fate. Your voice as the soft sensual heartbreak. Your tears as the time of have never been Infatuation, sensuality, love. a fine poem. tony