Sunday, November 29, 2015

No Late You Do Comments

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You do not do more late
Come on dear soon near
I am still waiting for you
See, morning dew is calling.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Kewayne Wadley 30 November 2015

Beautifully arranged! Nice usage of nature. KW

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Akhtar Jawad 29 November 2015

Beauty you have designed I am drinking nectar daily, There is tight bond within us I feel your love in nature. Love of nature nicely penned.

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Rajnish Manga 29 November 2015

Everything is your gift But I am missing you sure. This is just amazing. This beautiful nature is the gift of God but we still have a quest for God Himself without whom the life be dreary. Thanks for sharing the poem, Kumarmani ji.

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Shakil Ahmed 29 November 2015

your yearning desire for your beloved is well presented in the poem, thanks for sharing

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Ging Taping 29 November 2015

Don't go too far.. stay in the corner of my mind.. Yes I am far but you can reach me through the distance of imagination.. just a thought

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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