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Beautifully arranged! Nice usage of nature. KW

Beauty you have designed I am drinking nectar daily, There is tight bond within us I feel your love in nature. Love of nature nicely penned.

Everything is your gift But I am missing you sure. This is just amazing. This beautiful nature is the gift of God but we still have a quest for God Himself without whom the life be dreary. Thanks for sharing the poem, Kumarmani ji.

your yearning desire for your beloved is well presented in the poem, thanks for sharing

Don't go too far.. stay in the corner of my mind.. Yes I am far but you can reach me through the distance of imagination.. just a thought