Tuesday, November 17, 2015

No I Won't Comments

Rating: 5.0

depressed mount of sun
and feeble supporting lines-
will i die unknown?
left rotting in the sand
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Ram Krishna Singh
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Souren Mondal 17 November 2015

A well crafted poem.. Thank you..

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R.k. Singh 17 November 2015

Thanks Souren for stopping by my latest poem.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 17 November 2015

they can't close their eyes to the images i brew for burying secrets against a dusty mirror against god's hidden errors. Beautiful poem with wonderful tiction. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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R.k. Singh 17 November 2015

Thanks Ratnakar for your appreciation of the tanka structure.

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Ram Krishna Singh

Ram Krishna Singh

Varanasi, Uttar Pradesh, India
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