Sunday, March 31, 2019

No, I'm Drunk Comments

Rating: 5.0

Would you breathe into this tube?
The policeman asked the man
Who'd been weaving in the traffic,
Causing many traffic jams.
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Practicing Poetess
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Aqua Flower 02 May 2019

Love love love the humor in this poem. You certainly can tell a good Tale. This is a good one!

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Thanks, Aqua. Telling a good tale? Easy-peasy, (especially for those with a touch of Irish in their blood.) But, making the tale RHYME? Now, that is an art! : -)

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Thanks, Aqua. Telling a good tale? Easy-peasy, (especially for those with a touch of Irish in their blood.) But, making the tale RHYME? Now, that is an art! : -)

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Jennifer Birchall 04 April 2019

A really funny poem, written wonderfully.

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Practicing Poetess 04 April 2019

Thank you, Jennifer. I had such fun writing this one! : -)

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Carl Roussell 02 April 2019

Really cool writing - and funny too! A 10

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Practicing Poetess 02 April 2019

Thank you, Carl. Always good to hear from you! : -)

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Ray Hansell 01 April 2019

Nice and humorous. I really enjoyed this.

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Practicing Poetess 02 April 2019

Glad you enjoyed this, Ray. Thanks for your comment! : -)

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Jankovic Zoran 01 April 2019

The driver benefited from talking to a police officer. The driving license lasted a few minutes longer.

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Practicing Poetess 02 April 2019

Haha Zoran, a few more minutes didn't make that much difference, did it? Thanks for commenting! : -)

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Kostas Lagos 01 April 2019

Great poem! Smart and funny! Made me laugh!

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Practicing Poetess 02 April 2019

Happy to make you laugh, Kostas! : -)

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Lamar Cole 31 March 2019

This is a very funny poem. It was hard to stop laughing.

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Practicing Poetess 02 April 2019

Glad you caught your breath, Lamar. Also, glad that you don't have asthma! : -)

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Bryony Sheldon 31 March 2019

Lighthearted and well written- 10 Thanks for sharing :)

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Practicing Poetess 31 March 2019

Thanks, Bryony, for reading and for your nice comment! : -)

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Bernard F. Asuncion 31 March 2019

Hehehe, nice one Ma'am.....10+++++++++++

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Practicing Poetess 31 March 2019

Thank you, Bernard. Enjoying a nice laugh together! : -)

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