Tuesday, March 28, 2006

No Hope To Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

Grey street corner
A frozen room
Lonely bed
A dying moon
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sal carter
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Cantrell Dicky 29 June 2007

I really enjoyed reading this awsome poem by you It is so nice, how simple your words drew a picture in my mind I saw what you saw Your words were very effective

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Cantrell Dicky 29 June 2007

I really enjoyed reading this awsome poem by you It is so nice, how simple your words drew a picture in my mind I saw what you saw Your words were very effective

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Robert Howard 27 January 2007

Beautiful poem! ! This reads like a litany of physical conditions that all carry emotional energy. In the end all of these images converge to a single point in the hope, against all the odds, that attends a human birth.

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Uriah Hamilton 09 October 2006

This poem is quite well-written, you have a true gift, hold onto it and don't forget it.

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Cantrell Dicky 30 June 2006

Your wording is fresh and very effective i am enjoying your work

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Scarlett Treat 28 March 2006

All pervasive loneliness that goes bone deep, and yet a child is born, so what life happens behind thos pock marked walls?

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