No Hope To Life Comments

I really enjoyed reading this awsome poem by you It is so nice, how simple your words drew a picture in my mind I saw what you saw Your words were very effective

I really enjoyed reading this awsome poem by you It is so nice, how simple your words drew a picture in my mind I saw what you saw Your words were very effective

Beautiful poem! ! This reads like a litany of physical conditions that all carry emotional energy. In the end all of these images converge to a single point in the hope, against all the odds, that attends a human birth.

This poem is quite well-written, you have a true gift, hold onto it and don't forget it.

Your wording is fresh and very effective i am enjoying your work

All pervasive loneliness that goes bone deep, and yet a child is born, so what life happens behind thos pock marked walls?