Monday, December 30, 2019

No Happy New Year Comments

Rating: 5.0

at the peripheries of nature that seem neither natural nor man made
that rangy area between town and urban sprawl
the builders spoil heaps full of broken brick and hardcore
where the grass slips from manicuredgreen trim
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Andy Brookes
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Bri Edwards 05 June 2021

Andy, i (think) i just sent you a message, using the poem comment area. I wish you well, my friend. : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 05 June 2021

Dear Andy, you may never read this. PH has suddenly, for me at least, perked up (performed better) compared to my experience with it during infrequent visits this year. My best to you always, my friend. bri : )

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Bri Edwards 10 February 2020

" hardcore" ? music? i doubt it. " the builders spoil heaps full of broken brick and hardcore" construction debris is piled up? ? i think you mean [NOT decent]: " dissent intransitive verb To have or express an opinion different from a prevailing or official position; disagree." 2nd stanza seems most clear and is my favorite. i once enjoyed walking in a suburban/country Nature Conservancy preserve, Thousand Acre Swamp. bri :)

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