My mother's footsteps
Were so quiet
I barely heard her leave.
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However, dear poet, the caption of the poem doesn't conform to the sobriety of the poem. ‘ Absquatulate' is often used in a humorous, demeaning sense. Which, of course is not the mood of the poem.
A totally different approach to the bond between the mother and the son. Extraordinary
As I was reading your poem, I cried. Shedding tears of sorrow for the pain that you've endured. And tears of joy...for your courage...for your maturity...for your honesty...for such great talent at such a young age. KEEP ON WRITING!
Quite passionate and very heartfelt. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.
It isn't a terrible poem sometimes, I think that and it published on this website and I get the most postive comments Bravo!
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