No Good Comments
The science may be doing no good
There shall be shortage of food
The population might be at dangerous level
There will be only sufferings and pain to tell
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WELCOME ROHINI DAUD a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1
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Save the planet Black_Corleone6 minutes ago I agree Comment +1
True Lubos Koudelka7 minutes ago Nice use of consonance and slant rhyme Comment +1
Persuasive, but not emotionally engaging Peter Olson4 minutes ago I can sense the persuasiveness and need for urgency to do something. However, I think the poem lacks the emotional aspect within the words. Although there is urgency, there needs to be passion and rhythm to emotionally engage the reader; otherwise, it feels much less like poetry and more like prose. This is my suggestion- I would fully understand it if this poem was designed to be more educational rather than persuasive.
The science may be doing no good There shall be shortage of food
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