No fun
Thursday,10th October 2019
No fun
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True, it is no use using force against innocent individuals. And you so rightly frame that they may not be in the least able to understand any type of criticism and the only way to approach them is through peace...an apt portrayal in the times of guns and warfare. (The pencil sketch is beautiful and real. However, I would like to suggest that the pic may not be suitable for the content.) Annapurna Sharma, Nellore, Oct 11,2019
An excellent poem with a great message for all. That is best way to gain their love and respect. They will feel good too.Loved the way you have expressed the idea in a poem. Thanks for sharing.
We should not criticism others rather we should support and care for them all. An interesting poem is beautifully penned.10
so encourage them in their effort make good rapport instead of offering fun an allow it to run smoothly........definitely, we must encourage them in their effort. A brilliant poem is nicely executed. Thanks for sharing.
so encourage them in their effort make good rapport instead of offering fun an allow it to run smoothly Hasmukh Mehta .poemhunter
Beautiful poem Hasmukh Mehta ji! Giti Tyagi, Patiala, Oct 12,2019