Friday, November 9, 2012

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Rating: 5.0

I don't have any friends
And then it was a blast
I thought I'm dying alone
But then they were all here
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Marium Fatima
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Rick Elpers 23 February 2013

Marium, hello. You have an amazing command of words! ! Clearly your intellegence comes through. Such heart! ! I love it. Please keep writing. For us and you...

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Marium Fatima 26 November 2012

Thanx aloot.. :) i never thought that my poeries would be lilked by people.. :)

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Jahan Zeb 20 November 2012

That is breath taking. Brilliant. This carry some meaning. Keep it up I was alone when I was alive And now when I'm dead They all come along

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Marium Fatima 09 November 2012

Thank you. :) I'm glad people here are liking my poetry.. :)

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Anita Sehgal 09 November 2012

so very touching and heart rending..

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