Friday, June 1, 2018

No Free Lunch Nor Free Supper Comments

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No free lunch nor free supper
Offered in this expensive life;
When one pays for his breakfast,
The high price cuts him like a knife.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
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Aqua Flower 01 June 2018

This is such an excellent poem about life! The message is wisely crafted and the title is fitting! Nice work!

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Much thanks for your wonderful feedback๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™

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Nudershada Cabanes 01 June 2018

A fine poem crafted from realities of life. Nothing is free everything we want we should work for. Well done Bernard.10

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Thanks, Nuder for such splendid remark๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™

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