Wednesday, October 10, 2018

No Fidelities Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sometimes,
Some are like stone,
They abandon us for others
Fidelities, hardly, known
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Sandra Feldman
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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 October 2018

2. and your words in this heart-wrenching poem are still echoing in me. Thank you for sharing this bitterest part of a mutual human life. You are absolutely right, the best way is to be alone, than stumbling time and again upon those irritating stones. A 10++++++++++ and much much more for the vote and ratings.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 October 2018

! . Such a greatest sadness having read this very emotive poem, Sandra. Indeed fidelity is far to seek when men are involved. The word fidelity associates me with men, that's why I mentioned this male group. It is as if they have only an instinct, animals alike. You wrote about No Fidelities, powerfully created but the melancholy is deepest, dear Sandra, I have gained so many emotions. Plse continue 2.

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Kostas Lagos 10 October 2018

The bitterness of betrayal spreads on this magnificent poem. Thanks

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Mahtab Bangalee 10 October 2018

Fidelities, hardly, known ..... I'm accustomed to being, Alone. /// nice this poetic tone

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