Thursday, July 18, 2019

No Escape Comments

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M.J. Lemon
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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 March 2023

A wonderful poem! Appreciated the underlying philosophy dear poet.....thoughtfully put.

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Susan Williams 18 August 2020

Part 4===okay, I did my fuzzy-brained best, but I am a Disciple of Christ so I gotta go with my fav three! You are the best- cuz you make me think- -which lately is quite a feat! !

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Mj Lemon 12 October 2020

Thank you so very much, Susan. Loved your comments and observations. On one level I was riffing on the importance of 3s in Western philosophies and religions. But then again, I thought, if 3 is really so important, why do conveniently reduce everything to 2...right-wrong, good-bad...it has been going on for ages. Thanks for the thought provoking comments.

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Susan Williams 18 August 2020

Part 3. But in the first poem, the author says there is no escape==you cannot save yourself==Only Jesus can save you... while Plato does what? philosophizes about a 3rd savior which is..... help me, Mj, I have lost myself, send Jesus, He can save me...

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Mj Lemon 12 October 2020

Well, we are stuck in a cultural mindset and have been centuries. Can we be saved?

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Susan Williams 18 August 2020

Thought 2- -The title is different as well. No, Escape- - - -to- - - No Escape Ah-ha, I am onto something now! " No! ! ! ! " " Escape! ! ! ! " A conversation suddenly shattered when one yells, NO. ESCAPE.... as in RUN FOR IT.... as in SAVE YOURSELF... because three different entities are after you.

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Mj Lemon 12 October 2020

Susan, absolutely. Yes! One is a command while the other describes our condition.

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Susan Williams 18 August 2020

Ah, ha! ! ! A poem I haven't read before! ! ! ! Yea! ! ! ! Looking forward to savoring the newness of a fresh poem or is it savoring the freshness of a new poem? IDK... I am just so excited! ! ! Oh. I've read this before- -but why didn't I comment? Oh, I see. It has a new way of writing three- maybe to get us readers up to scratch........I'll be back after I contemplate three and 3....

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Bri Edwards 29 September 2019

2 – i've had it on good authority that an ancestor of mine, ...from WAY, WAY BACK, developed what was at first called the whealen, later changed to wheelen, then wheelin, and finally (by St. Peter) to wheel. But the first one was actually square, not round. bri :) p.s. U. Soul, i thought all you guys used chopsticks.

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Bri Edwards 29 September 2019

1 – at first i thought you might be referring to the Western # 3: Donald Trump. now i don't know WHAT you are referring to. i'm not sure i understood the Poet's Notes any better, BUT....THANKS for them anyway.

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Mj Lemon 04 October 2019

Hi Bri, You mean...3 Trumps? ? Or, were you tripping on Don, Don jr. and Eric? ! ? ! ? !

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Unwritten Soul 24 July 2019

Rice, bowl and spoon/fork...3s, Asian cant escape from it Combination of three that need to feed one stomach hahahha This one has nothing to do to mock your idea, i just tried to write as you inspired the 3s

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Mj Lemon 30 July 2019

And it was a nice, humourous effort...So many 3s, Soul. So many threes. Thanks for reading, Soul.

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Richard Wlodarski 18 July 2019

God created gorilla. Gave him 98% human DNA. Gorilla failed test. God created Man. Gave him Woman. They failed test. God created peace. Man and Woman failed. Gave God war.

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Mj Lemon 18 July 2019

Richard- - perfection. Your words are a brilliant poetic reply. Thank you.

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Jane Campion 18 July 2019

Putting two and two together you get three.We are linked to our origins by DNA. However, we are all uniquely different. That is a blessing and a problem.

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Mj Lemon 18 July 2019

Thank you so much, Jane. Yes, in life and biology. Two create the third...and so travels life, on a clear forward path. Yet in some remarkable way, the journey is firmly rooted, static....

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