Friday, March 13, 2009

No End Comments

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i went under it and found no end
i climb over it and found no end
i went through it and found no end
this over powering thing that i cant explain
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Adens Kamwi
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Marieta Maglas 22 September 2009

nice philosophical poem, thank you for sharing.10

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Whisperkwane Lamb 22 September 2009

people in away are your mirrors...and you are the one which see...that reflection... let not the mirror...write for you...you feel it...write it...

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Sans Serif 22 September 2009

Great poem. it kinda leaves me guessing what you are talking about. Did you mean for the person to guess what it was or what? Either way good poem.

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Adens Kamwi

Adens Kamwi

Katima Mulilo, Namibia
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