Tuesday, August 7, 2012

No Dreams Comments

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What would we do if we had no dreams?
No themes, no streams, no things to play
With; Darkness all and all around.
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Osama Waqar
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Usman Hanif 13 November 2012

Its quite good man... simple assumption and then its consequences. your flow is good :) KEEP ON WRITING, , , :) if you don't mind I'd say go a bit ahead, be more imaginative, show your uniqueness... when you write something it probably has occurred to you as a unique thought which not only inspire the reader but make him think about it in awe that yesssss it is possible, i never thought about that.

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Osama Waqar

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