'No Direction Home', Scorcese's Dylan Documentary Comments

This reminded me that I meant to buy this documentary and I loved every moment of watching it. It has the reverence of the true Dylan fan. I really loved this poem but not sure I completely understood the ending. I might suggest a change to: 'bear witness silently and listen closely' or 'bear witness silently but listen closely' - each ending creates a different meaning and a different ambiguity.

I AM A FAN OF HIS MAX THOUGH I AM NOT OVERAWED BY HIM HIS AUDIENCE IN HIS HEYDAY WERE MISLED CREATURES, MAINLY UNIVERSITY EDUCATED POWDER PUFFS ROBERT