Tuesday, December 10, 2024

No Difference, Same Relationship Comments

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Above the ground,
Without complaint, the sky
remains animated, yet motiotnless
after rain or snow.
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Shane Markie
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Good poem. The similarity between ‘sky' and ‘you' is very interesting. My objection, but, is against your statement "At my feet", which looks ‘man-centric' if not male-chauvinistic.

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