Above the ground,
Without complaint, the sky
remains animated, yet motiotnless
after rain or snow.
At my feet,
you remain unchanged,
also animated, yet motionless
after we had sex.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Good poem. The similarity between ‘sky' and ‘you' is very interesting. My objection, but, is against your statement "At my feet", which looks ‘man-centric' if not male-chauvinistic.