No Difference, Same Relationship Poem by Shane Markie

No Difference, Same Relationship

Rating: 4.0

Above the ground,
Without complaint, the sky
remains animated, yet motiotnless
after rain or snow.

At my feet,
you remain unchanged,
also animated, yet motionless
after we had sex.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Good poem. The similarity between ‘sky' and ‘you' is very interesting. My objection, but, is against your statement "At my feet", which looks ‘man-centric' if not male-chauvinistic.

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