No Deceit Comments

YOU SKIPPED MY COMMENT DIDN'T LIKE IT TELL ME I SHALL REMOVE IT KVE From the scorching summer sun- Your ego, at its zenith just beautiful show them your bare feet nudity is a preserve for someone special great words o poet keep at it

The usage of the word wall is always amazing...from graffiti to inhibition...you have impressed the reader very much using 'wall' in your unique style...great work 10++

A strikingly lovely metaphor to convey honest devoid of deceit. Well done dear poet.

An excellent metaphorical write. In friendship there should be no pretensions. We should lay our cards on the table. Be open and honest. Brilliantly penned!

Friendship needs no cover. It cannot enter where there are walls of separation erected. It can come only when the heart is open without walls or barricades. A lovely metaphorical poem!

A nice metaphor, truly meaningful. I read it with the special reference to Indo-Pak relations.

Warm and wet! ! No deceit! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

From the scorching summer sun- Your ego, at its zenith just beautiful show them your bare feet nudity is a preserve for someone special great words o poet keep at it

You first remove this wall You have built inside your mind I am waiting to step in With my naked feet No cover- no veil on my nails No dust either, none deceit /// excellently expressed; beautiful poem penned on friendship and living solidarity

It radiates heat that it receives/From the scorching summer sun- Your ego, at its zenith......wonderful expression! An excellent poem........10+++