Sunday, October 11, 2009

No Crime Comments

Rating: 5.0

NO CRIME
Don’t look askance
‘cause I’m not young
Some day you’ll
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monica monet
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Eyan Desir 30 October 2009

....Good flow of words good write

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Nikunj Sharma 22 October 2009

This poem spans across a lifetime, Being there is definitely no crime The raging bull of youth, newfangled ideas, uncouth Challange and raise their heads, storms don't spare anyone Withere leaves, may not belong, but promise to stay long....

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Vijay Menon 15 October 2009

a fine poem nice 10 and many plus

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Kesav Easwaran 12 October 2009

short and striking lines...all cute...you have a valid point there to make Monica...the wave analogy reads good...thanks...10

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