Sunday, February 12, 2006

No Consideration Comments

Rating: 5.0

You had no consideration for ones life.
You ran him down, left him in the road, to die.
His body was hit at such impact,
his head severed, his body no longer intact!
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Deborah Ashdown
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Gina Onyemaechi 12 February 2006

This is more like it, Deborah: a different story, a different structure, but no compromise on the passionate feeling behind it. Yes, this is the way to go. As for the actual story, so sad, Deborah, so sad. Best wishes, Gina.

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