Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Sunday, April 20, 2014

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It is hope against hope
Nothing moves contrary and flops
It is his blessings that works
The world around seems good with words
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 April 2014

Like 8 hours ago by Melissa Vigna to No chance to fail

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 April 2014

welcome Emilia Ayuk Farasha Hanem like this. 3 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 April 2014

Rajesh Jaiswal and Farasha Hanem like this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome 4 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 April 2014

Like 3 minutes ago by Melissa Vigna | Reply

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 April 2014

Hopeful Delilah Smith3 minutes ago This was very well written, and I hope to read more of your work. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 April 2014

Nice rhyming, flow Krista Greene2 minutes ago Good rhyme and flow. Clear intent. Wish there were stronger imagery or emotion attached. Keep writing! Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 April 2014

It is hope against hope Nothing moves contrary and flops

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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