No Boundaries Comments

Hi Chrystya, A very passionate poem of love! ! ! Almost on the boundary of possessiveness... Even when you say, you are ready to endure hardships for sake, your possessiveness shows: I'd go to the ends of every universe just to see you smile. I'd swim to the bottom of the ocean just to hold you for a while. My love knows no boundaries when it comes to you. It is always I would and My love... indicating the mindset of the lover, , , A psychological journey through the mind of the lover is depicted in the poem... Marvelously done.... And the exquisite rhyme and meter of the poem suits this mood of the poem; its inward-looking theme.. A 10++++