No Boundaries Poem by Crystal Pierce

No Boundaries

Rating: 5.0


I'd go to the ends of every universe just to see you smile.
I'd swim to the bottom of the ocean just to hold you for a while.
My love knows no boundaries when it comes to you.
My heart no longer feels empty, it no longer feels blue.
Right now you're gone away, but only for a little bit, you'll be back soon.
And when you get back we will be together all morning and afternoon.
So hurry back, please! Hurry back soon.

Friday, June 9, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 09 June 2017

Hi Chrystya, A very passionate poem of love! ! ! Almost on the boundary of possessiveness... Even when you say, you are ready to endure hardships for sake, your possessiveness shows: I'd go to the ends of every universe just to see you smile. I'd swim to the bottom of the ocean just to hold you for a while. My love knows no boundaries when it comes to you. It is always I would and My love... indicating the mindset of the lover, , , A psychological journey through the mind of the lover is depicted in the poem... Marvelously done.... And the exquisite rhyme and meter of the poem suits this mood of the poem; its inward-looking theme.. A 10++++

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