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Nice..ur very good, keep writing...10 :)

In reading this poem, I can almost picture Conscience walking around...flesh and bone. It's brilliant!

very very nice piece. i really enjoyed. we do have a conversation with our concious without realizing it. thanks alot for sharing it.

Nice piece, u'r conversant with wordplay...a nice style. We can't do away with our conscience, we are one.It defines our fate.

Another masterpiece Kesav....reminds me of Shakespeare's Hamlet...'Conscience doth make cowards of us all' 10+

Very interesting Kesav. I think sometimes we would, really like to see our conscience as someone else and some look at themselves that way anyways. Thankyou for sharing

good expression sir sandhya

brilliant poem, Kesav! the last two lines are best... very high level

Yeah but one must cross the barrier of conscience because conscience is made by thoughts imbibed from society...... Then you will find true guidance- a guidance of your soul. Yes for that one must be sincere should be bereft of preferences, impulses.......... The processes is painful but every one must do it in this life or life hereafter.This is the only way.... Also know as walking on razor sharp path............ And heaven of endless bliss wait at other side.......... Good Write.........

sir....this poem has great depth.....inner struggle is shown so brilliantly....you rreally have given us a poem which forces you to think...It goes to my fav list.

'This booing shadow of my mind inner, This conscience I bear, is no better...' superb write! a thought provoking one. you are awesome as always!

where would we be without our conscience? well penned sir.......

wonderful..........deep insight............... the one and only being i am afraid is that HE.........

A very engaging and thought provoking write, Kesav. Thanks. Richard

As always, your words perfect the subject and absolutely make it glow with a richness. I loved the message that you shared.

wow! yah! ....i do belive in you the scene behind in us is the everything that says something that calls us to move to do, to think, yet! all are just a shadow of the alter ego of our life....you have a beautiful poem of this century....thank you and God bless a 10 +

Brilliantly written my friend a wonderful piece.

Well Kesav what can i say but I luv your poems...this one couldn't be different... Karla Bardanza

If we listen and learn we are making great strides about learning about ourselves, Good job.

wow that was amazing great poem 10 :)