Monday, January 19, 2009

No Apologies Comments

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My feelings turn to stone, my heart makes no apologies.
When an apology's made, it isn't always enough to erase all the past in a moment.
Whenever I need you the most, you always leave me behind.
With a word from your lips, I'm alone.
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Hailey Marie
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Silence Dogood 20 January 2009

The last three lines are the best the rest needs improvement

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I have been there its hard.. I like how you wrote this poem you write very well Krista

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Hailey Marie

Hailey Marie

Brampton, Ontario - Canada
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