Saturday, April 11, 2020

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They have been increasing garbage in the underworld,
And have been waiting for an Angel to come as a sweeper,
Once in a century the sweeper comes as a thunder-world,
And goes back to skies leaving earth looking a bit cleaner,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 April 2020

Another wonderful poem worth to ponder about. Insightful lines crafted by a great mind.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 12 April 2020

aap is very good many read you JA SIR why don't now read me u

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Nosheen Irfan 12 April 2020

Another gem of a piece from your mighty pen. Always a pleasure to read you. Very profound thoughts poured out beautifully. A big 10.

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 12 April 2020

Immersive! There are many alternates of the things existed here, but except nature, life. Sensitive.

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