Wednesday, July 25, 2007

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No sorrow no tears
No worries no fears
No doubts no stress
No lying no test
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DENNIS TAYLOR
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Dana Bowen 12 February 2008

This poem has a pleasing meter and foot. Personally, I was disappointed in the ending. Such a nice message, about changing the poor state of our reality. Then slipping into fantasy so easily.

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