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Most of the girls (Anna, Sophy, Sunny, Bili, Leong and Lisa) are in the kitchen eating breakfast. "Where's Anais? " Sunny asks, spooning some eggs onto her plate and taking 4 strips of bacon.
"She's out by the pool, feeling sorry for herself." Leong whispers, distractedly, reading the "Fruity Pebbles" box and poking the multicolored flakes with her spoon. "These are good."
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anais, PH &/or this Chrome P'C has again messed up my sending of comments; I'm sure 'it' is NOT my fault (again) . If you don't receive at least 5 comments here from me, call me. You KNOW my number, RIGHT? ? bri 5 ***** stars
(cont.) THIS STANZA: ' 'Hey, ' Sunny said as she approached, 'mind company? ' '
anais, In this stanza most of it is in the PAST TENSE. I guess IT's NOT hurting anyone, but I noticed (CONT.)
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8/15/2025 12:01:17 PM # 1.0.0
Do YOU see my comment about 'superfluous' commas in 1 sentence? I may NEVER have used 'that' word EVER! bri : )