Tuesday, June 10, 2014

Nirvana's Wind Comments

Rating: 5.0

Castles in the air
Endure an unwavering breeze
Nirvana's wind
Takes a blasted breath
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Christian Hudak
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Colleen Courtney 10 June 2014

Like how the first two lines pull the reader in. Well done!

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