Wednesday, March 2, 2005

Nirvana Comments

Rating: 4.5

And when
Heads in no mood to take further
Fogs and fumes with me alone
Critically taking steps upstairs
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Agata Konopka 11 March 2005

You could fairly clearly divide this up into several poems, if you plan to write poems this long I suggest a narrative of some sort in order for there to be aside from thoughts and emotions a continuity, and a clarity of intention

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