Wednesday, November 26, 2008

....Nirvana? .... Comments

Rating: 3.0

come to me
i am shattered
collect me in your palm
put me together again
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wardha jawdat
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Sathyanarayana M V S 04 August 2009

Wow! Very touching poem. Almost similar to one of my poems. I called it 'Atonement'. That is the only difference.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 30 May 2009

Thoughts provoking wonderful poem.10+++

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Kesav Easwaran 05 December 2008

good piece with insightful philosophical touch...all of us lead life the same way, Wardha...being 'juiced' out at our expense...no wonder one feels shattered at times...10

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Chitra - 30 November 2008

reconnecting with the higher self re-triggers a whole new process of understanding the cosmic self sans all the negative influences wonder write

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